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The painting above is one I've just started; it's 2 1/2 feet tall and 4 feet wide. It's not quite finished, but it's at a point just past the opening -- to use chess terminology -- and deep into the middlegame. What I'd like is a little feedback -- tell me what you think I should add, subtract or change to make this a finished piece. I'd also like your thoughts on a title. Just click comment below -- I'd greatly appreciate it!